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_JJ_TOPIC Brilliant!

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annaalexandrae (User)
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graphgraph
Brilliant! 2008/04/04 23:12  
Just wanted to say it was a great story... and I pretty much want to do the exact same thing that you've done with your life!

Could I ask you my own ten questions?
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Stacy (User)
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graphgraph
That was interesting! 2008/04/07 18:56  
I thought the story was interesting but for some reason it didn't really flow to me... I think it would be better if you could vary the cadence of the sentences. The rythm seemed a bit repetitive and that made it a little harder to concentrate.

However - what an awesome experience!!! I really envy you! I love to travel as well and would love to experience all that you have! :*)
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