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cewaye(User)
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Re:Comments are welcome. This Story can be found a 2008/04/06 23:51
Wow! The events of that story are remarkable. That's the kind of thing you see in movies...to think it can really happen...amazing. And I like the way he weaves in the responsibility he feels at having been spared...
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Stacy(User)
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Re:Comments are welcome. This Story can be found at: 2008/04/12 09:02
While I do think that the events of the story were remarkable, I found it very difficult to read and pay attention because of the choppy sentences. It needs cleaned up; it just doesn't flow the way it's written/edited right now. It definitely has possibilities though.
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#81
pippa121(User)
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Re:Comments are welcome. This Story can be found at: 2008/04/23 20:16
Wow - I've heard a few of these types of stories, & it's still amazing! I think it's great that he says it changed how he looks at all other people now, in a good way. He took it to heart and wasn't just happy that his life was spared. That's inspiring.
I also agree that the beginning of this story is quite choppy, & a little hard to follow.
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dmdifalco(User)
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Re:Comments are welcome. This Story can be found a 2008/05/16 17:52
A wonderful account of God's intervention. This is very inspiring!!!!
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#189
saschab(User)
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Re:Comments are welcome. This Story can be found a 2008/05/16 19:38
Gave me powerful shivers...enough said.
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